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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 29 2009, 05:49 PM (1,335 Views) | |
| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 05:49 PM Post #1 |
 
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Chapter 1:Anew Saiyan Appears There Have Been Many Powerful Warriors Throughout The Milena! But Ages Of Use Of The DragonBalls Have Brought About Anew Sinister Foe! The Earth's Maxium Point Has Been Reached! Now Only The Saiyans Can Stop This New Threat[Omega Shenron]. The Ultimate Evil Dragon Was On The Verge On Destroying Earth. As Gohan,Trunks,Goten,& Uub Were Drained Of Power They Could Only Watch As Goku & Vegeta Did Their Best. The Time Is Now The Fusion Has Been Completed & Omega Shenron is Shocked. Shenron Manages To Break Up The Fusion & Knock Goku & Vegeta Unconcious[But Then]. A Light In the Sky The Spirit Bomb Has Been Dropped Evil Shenron Is Gone. At Capusle Corp Vegeta Angrily:Damn It...how is that kakarot is still able to go past super saiyan 4 & I Can't? He's even said that this new achived super saiyan is better that super saiyan 4! how is that possible Trunks:Well father he's something else he's a born natural. Vegeta:What does that mean? I'm a full blooded saiyan like him to! Trunks:oh nothing! Suddenly An Eerry Feeling Makes Vegeta's Blood Run Cold Down His Spine Vegeta:T That power can it be? another legendary super saiyan? Wait who's that? ???:Find out for yourself! Vegeta:allright i will fight me ???:hump! allright but it's your deathwish They Fight! Vegeta:glaick gun! ???:dragoon wave! Vegeta:i'm gonna beat you freak! ???:if you say so! Vegeta:final ???:Ka...me... Vegeta:flash ???:ha...me...ha Vegeta:what the? Vegeta:i don't know how you learned that move but i assure you that you've never fought a super saiyan 3! ???:i've already past super saiyan 3 & 4! Vegeta:you lie! ???:it's true...i'm what you call a super saiyan 4 1/2 Vegeta:die Vegeta:hhaaaaaa.....haaaaaaaa Vegeta:now do see the power i have? but don't worry i won't kill you as a super saiyan 3! i'll kill you as a super saiyan 4!.....hhhhaaaaaaaaa ???:pathetic[super fast instant transmission] ???:punch to the gut &! Vegeta:g..gw...gwah! Vegeta falling to the floor:what the ***** are you? Vegeta now on the ground ko'ed get trunks upset causing him to transform into a super saiyan 2 & fight ??? Trunks:you monster ???:be glad i didn't kill him as i'm not gonna kill you Trunks:buster ???:Ka...me... Trunks:cannon ???:ha...me...ha Trunks[thinking to himself]:what is guy? ???:someone that you don't want to fight...lights out Trunks:gwah...father! with goku away training & trunks & vegeta knocked out no one knows who this new guy is & why he's here.as gohan senses this new power & rushes to the scene to check it out along with goten will we(you)find out who this new person is? find out next time on dragonball nb halo |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 05:51 PM Post #2 |
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last time on dragonball nb a strange new character came to earth for some unknown reasons & put both trunks & vegeta in a coma for 3 weeks! who is new guy he says he's a saiyan so lets find out! Chapter 2:The New Saiyan's Name Vegeta:die Vegeta:hhaaaaaa.....haaaaaaaa Vegeta:now do see the power i have? but don't worry i won't kill you as a super saiyan 3! i'll kill you as a super saiyan 4!.....hhhhaaaaaaaaa ???:pathetic[super fast instant transmission] ???:punch to the gut &! Vegeta:g..gw...gwah! Vegeta falling to the floor:what the ***** are you? Trunks [thinking to himself]:what is guy? ???:someone that you don't want to fight...lights out Trunks:gwah...father! after the fight ???:well that was almost to easy! [i wonder where the saiyans are on this planet?] ???:don't tell me it's only 2 full-blooded saiyans & a 1/2 saiyan on this planet! Gohan:wrong there's 3 1/2 saiyans on this planet! ???:who the hell are you 1/2 saiyan? Gohan:i'm gohan son of the full blooded saiyan goku Goten:yea & i'm goten & this is my brother & those are my friends! ???:yea & Gohan:you'll pay for what you've done Goten:look he has a tail Goten:you don't think Gohan:what the he's saiyan but i thought we were the only ones left Goten:isn't that vegeta's line Gohan:yea but he's unconscious so i had to say it ???:what do want now that you know i'm a saiyan? gohan:! goten:well you can start off by telling me why you hurt my friends! ???:i anwser to no-one for i have no fear goten:you'll pay for that gohan:goten no don't ???:pathectic goten:gwah ???:that better be the last one who tries something like that ???:you can ask your question now gohan:who are you & whats your name Halo:my names halo & as you know i'm a saiyan Halo:bye for now at goku's house chi-chi:where have you been boys? gohan:mom not now goten:mom not now chi-chi:???? chi-chi:get back here now chi-chi:oh man there they go again goku:hey boys gohan:dad who's goten:halo goku:oh him goku:he's a saiyan i met in other world he travels there freely & hasen't died vegeta:so he can do that trunks:no wonder why he didn't kill you dad vegeta:why you goku:oh yea i ment to mention that he's a legendary super saiyan vegeta:another one gohan[sigh]:oh man goten[sigh]:oh man trunks[sigh]:oh man goku:oh don't worry he's nothing like broly trunks:phew goten:phew gohan:phew goku:allthough they're both somewhat closely related vegeta:aw ***** goku:so you fought him vegeta vegeta:yea & i lost badily goku:that's what you get for picking a fight vegeta:shut up kakarot |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 05:57 PM Post #3 |
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chapter 3:the setup somewhere in the moutains halo:i wonder who else in on this planet besides humans & the saiyans? picclio:well you can try me! dende:& me! halo:what the?...nameks? picclio:yes were nameks! halo:so why didn't you go back to new namek when the wish was made? dende:how do you know that? halo:i can teleport to other world & other worlds picclio:i didn't leave because earth is like a second home to me dende:i'm the protector/guardian of earth so i can't leave halo:seems reasonabile halo:i was searching to see if there were other saiyans besides me & goku Dende: So why are you here? Halo: I wanted to know if there are stronger Saiyans than Goku around... A voice suddenly called over: And you will die before me. Halo turned around to see who had visited him this time. Halo: Who are you? ?????: someone who despises saiyans halo:speak now or die ?????:i anwser to no saiyan halo:you have 5 sceonds to speak or i'll kill you halo:5,4,3,2 1/2,2,1 1/2,1 ?????allright my name is refrigeratar i'm the son of cooler & despise saiyans like my father! halo:& i care why refrigeratar:because if you want to live then you'll follow me picclio:no halo don't go he's lieing refrigeratar:if you wish to save your planet then you'll listen Picclio:go if you want but don't say i didn't warn you halo:ok i'll go picclio:he acts just like goku somwhere on distant planet refrigeratar:where here halo:what is this place refrigeratar:the place where we put your grave halo:what refrigeratar:you should of listened to the nameks & killed when you had the chance now you're gonna die here! halo:& just you & what army is gonna kill me refrigeratar:only me & the souls of the dead in the netherworld halo:what hell refrigeratar:yes the entire army of hell refrigeratar:hahahahahaaaahhhaaaaahhaahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! halo:you bastard...bring it on refrigeratar:allright the fight with hell starts turles:well well if it isn't halo halo:what the turles turles:yes it's me & i also have nappa & broly with me nappa:you ready die in hell punk broly:kakarot...hahahahahaha halo:lets go turles:allright....aaahhhhhhhhh halo:how did you reach super saiyan 2 turles:simple i watched kakarot do it a milliena of times & practiced it myself nappa:rrrrrrraaahhhh halo:did his beard just turn yellow broly:aaahhhh...ahhhhhh....rrraaaaahhhhgggggghhhhh halo:aw hell he turned super saiyan 3 1/2 halo:oh well time to kill whats already dead |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 05:58 PM Post #4 |
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last time on dragonball nb our new saiyan friend halo was lured into a fight in hell! as he stood in the netherreleam looking at the dead spirits of others & his brother that he didn't knew existed! how does one deal with something like this? find out now chapter 4:the fight in hell Picclio:go if you want but don't say i didn't warn you halo:ok i'll go picclio:he acts just like goku somwhere on distant planet refrigeratar:where here halo:what is this place refrigeratar:the place where we put your grave halo:what refrigeratar:you should of listened to the nameks & killed when you had the chance now you're gonna die here! halo:& just you & what army is gonna kill me refrigeratar:only me & the souls of the dead in the netherworld halo:what hell refrigeratar:yes the entire army of hell refrigeratar:hahahahahaaaahhhaaaaahhaahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! halo:you bastard...bring it on refrigeratar:allright the fight with hell starts turles:well well if it isn't halo halo:what the turles turles:yes it's me & i also have nappa & broly with me nappa:you ready die in hell punk broly:kakarot...hahahahahaha halo:lets go turles:allright....aaahhhhhhhhh halo:how did you reach super saiyan 2 turles:simple i watched kakarot do it a milliena of times & practiced it myself nappa:rrrrrrraaahhhh halo:did his beard just turn yellow broly:aaahhhh...ahhhhhh....rrraaaaahhhhgggggghhhhh halo:aw hell he turned super saiyan 3 1/2 halo:oh well time to kill whats already dead continuing halo:you think you can beat me because we're in hell & you'll allready dead? well guess again! turles:yes pretty much halo:as i said before guess again broly:i'm gonna kill you if i can't kill kakarot halo:you need to watch what you say before you say it nappa:you're in no postion to be making threats halo:it's not a threat it's a promise turles:enough talk time to die nappa:yes i agree no more legendary super saiyans to try & kill us halo/broly:have you forgotten that vegeta has killed you twice & he's not a legendary super saiyan? nappa:shut up! fight & die! halo:allright but it's your after life funeral! turles:i'm first the first hell fight begins turles:you're gonna pay for leaving us to die on planet vegeta & we're gonna see to it halo:whatever turles:take this bastard halo:wow that hurt...sike!!!! turles:gwah halo:now you take this halo's attack send turles flying across the lake of hellfire & onto a hellstone crater! halo:& you expect to beat me with those moves pathetic wretch turles:raahhh halo:wow i'm scared turles:ahhh.....ahhhhh....haaaa....rrraaahhh halo:what the **** he reached super saiyan 3 turles:& now to take a peice of fruit form the tree of hell halo:gwah....what the his...his power just increased 10x turles:now die legendary super saiyan turles:devil saiyan blast! halo:ahh ***** that hurt! halo:my turn big bang dragon fang turles:ah what the my body! what's happening to my body? halo:pure energy can't mix with negative energy so i used plenty of pure energy to stop you from completely moving! turles:*****ing bastard! after turles is stopped from moving nappa wants next nappa:i want next halo:don't do that to yourself nappa:i'll kill you halo:ok this will only take 5 seconds nappa pulls out all the stops but it's no use halo's not even trying to fight back halo:my turn! take this & stay down halo unleashed a ki blast that had very little power but enought to kill nappa for a third time nappa:wwrraagghh halo! you bastard! after nappa is killed in hell it's broly turn & he's ready to fight another legendary super saiyan broly:ok now my turn halo:i say on this fight about an hour tops broly:don't make a promise you can't keep! when it might cost you your life halo:you know for a dead guy you sure do talk alot broly:shut up & fight the fight with hell broly lasted 2 hours & halo alomst reahced something he never became ever in his life! in the end both broly & halo maxed each-other out by useing all their strongest attacks! halo was about to kill broly but something told him not to that he'll find out what they have in common later! so halo spared broly's life & broly didn't try & use dirty tatics & halo escapes hell! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 06:01 PM Post #5 |
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last time on DragonBall NB: halo fought broly in hell & spared his life! as he was leaving hell a voice called to him telling him that an android was comming to earth to do something strange! who's this new android you ask find out now! the fight with hell broly lasted 2 hours & halo alomst reahced something he never became ever in his life! in the end both broly & halo maxed each-other out by useing all their strongest attacks! halo was about to kill broly but something told him not to that he'll find out what they have in common later! so halo spared broly's life & broly didn't try & use dirty tatics & halo escapes hell! chapter 5:Super Android 18 halo:hm that fight in hell took a lot out of me i'm complete drained! gohan:hey halo we're going to the ramen store! want anything? halo:yea get me 7 shrimp ramen packs,7 chicken packs,& 14 beef packs goku:you sure you're gonna eat all those halo:got damn kakarot you sure are greedy! & if you touch my ramen then i'm gonna hurt you! vegeta:well if you ask me then i'm gonna beat both of you halo:vegeta didn't you learn anything form last timei kicked your *****? trunks:hold on! no need for violence halo:whatever! halo:!!!! goku:what happened? gohan:dad you feel that? vegeta:it feels like super android 17! halo:allright he's mine! vegeta:not if i get there first! halo:chump! halo arrives where super 17 is but is shocked when he gets there because it's not 17! it's 18 halo:what the 18 what are you doing here #18:you have me mistaken i don't know you halo:sure you do! you live with krillin & have a daughter that's 14! #18:are you sure you have the right android 18? halo:so then if you're not the 18 i know then who are you #18:i am android 18 but not the one you know halo:oh ok #18:so now that you understand can you tell me where the 18 is that you know halo:oh her? she's at master roshi's house visiting for the day with krillin & her daughter #18:ok thank you the new android 18 flys off to find her other half for her own reasons roshi:uuh hey 18! how did you get out of the house? #18:back door! roshi:nice one krillin:18 how did you get out? when you're sleep with marron? #18:back door krillin's 18:hey what's going on here? #18:ah there you are krillin's 18:let me guess you want to fuse to become all powerful? #18:yes krillin's 18:ok let's do it the two android 18's fuse by the way super 17 was made ????:i'm super android 18 krillin:ah..ahh roshi(in perv mode):krillin look boobie bombs & a big butt krillin:ahhh! thud after the fusion was complete a new imperfect cell showed up to asorb super 18 new cell:ah thank you for fusing now i shall be more powerful than i am now super 17:leave my sister alone freak super 18:17 how did you survive super 17:i'll tell you later new cell:it doesn't matter because i'll take you both in all the same super 17:whatever new cell:get inside of me super 17/18:die new cell:ahhhh new cell was destroyed by both of the super androids by super accel dance! krillin wakes up only to faint again by her pressence! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 06:02 PM Post #6 |
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new cell:ah thank you for fusing now i shall be more powerful than i am now super 17:leave my sister alone freak super 18:17 how did you survive super 17:i'll tell you later new cell:it doesn't matter because i'll take you both in all the same super 17:whatever new cell:get inside of me super 17/18:die new cell:ahhhh last time on dragonball nb a new cell appeared trying to do what his ancestor did! as the new cell found super android 17 & 18 & tryed to asorb them he got killed! but as a new day approches so does another new sinister foe! chapter 6:the androids become saiyans?? halo is on the rooftop thinking to himself & why new cell appeared like the old one halo:hm today seems normal! nothing out of the ordaniry! goku:you know you really should relax more often! halo:have you ever been to hell goku? goku:yea i have twice actually! halo:well then you know why i can't relax super 17:i also know why you are a legendary super saiyan! halo/goku:17? gwah! where the hell did you come from? super 17:inside from taking a nap! halo/goku:but you're an android you have no reason to sleep! super 17:shut up halo:hey watch what you say! cuz i can break your little android ***** in half super 17:you wanna fight halo:i've been waiting for you to say something like that! lets go! goku:hey...hey...hey! no need for violence! vegeta:what the hell is going on up here? halo/super 17:don't worry about it chump! after a few hours have past halo thought of a way to turn the androids into saiyans halo:hey krillin go get 17,18,goku,vegeta,trunks,goten & everybody else i have a little surprise for you! krillin:well what is it? halo:if i told you now it wouldn't be a surprise now would it? krillin:good point halo(thinking to himself):hm i'll get the earth dragonballs, & the namek dragonballs & turn both androids into saiyans here on earth! gohan:you are such a dog! halo:shut up! halo:hey gohan do you know where bulma is? gohan:yea she's at home! why? halo:i need the dragon radar! gohan:oh that here halo:i should hurt you right now gohan:i'm not even going to ask why halo:good now i'm going to get the dragonballs & i want you to keep them safe until i return! gohan:allright! halo traveled to namek to find the namekian dragonballs & when he got there he was in luck because they were alltogether! halo:good i'm in luck there all here namekian:the elder has predicted that you'd arrive for your friend halo:then you know why i'm here namekian:yes take them halo:thanks! give my respect to the elder namekian:ok halo's trip to & from namek only took 2 earth days krillin:well damn halo that was fast! halo:yea i know & this will be even faster halo unleashed a blast that knocked out krillin & the rest of the humans! & he then summoned good shenron & puronga shenron/puronga:rraahhhh.....you who have gathered the seven dragonballs we shall grant you any five things you wish! halo:good i'll make this real quick halo:my first wish is for super 17 & 18 to be full blooded saiyans shenron/puronga:first wish granted halo:my second wish is for planet vegeta & the saiyans back from the dead on planet vegeta shenron/puronga:second wish granted halo:my third wish is for me,goku,gohan,& some of the selected few saiyans i touch to have immortality shenron/puronga:how many will that be? halo:35 shenron/puronga:third wish granted halo:now you to can go back to sleep shenron/puronga:farewell after the wishes were granted everyone thought that all was fine but little did they know that a new cell was approching & fast but the twist is he's human so no one knows what will happen next! find out next time |
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| BattleMetal | Jun 29 2009, 06:11 PM Post #7 |
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This is a badly written fan fic mate. Bad dialogue, i found it hard to follow. It was annoying how you made people speak too. No description what so ever just non-stop talking and noises, you dont know whats going on till someone else talks or you decide someones been knocked out and let us know at the end. Theres no build up, theres nothing to work off of. Where is the fighting? Just things like 'Gallick Gun!' and 'KameHamaHa' every other sentence? You need to check your spelling too and sentence structure. Youve not broke it up enough either. Vegeta just wakes from a 3 week coma?? He is just completely fine and dandy... i know you wanted to show how bad the beating was that he got from Halo but come on man. Mate seriously you might have an idea but its not being done very well so far. Im all for fanfics but you need to write it better. I only read upto to Chapter 2 when i posted this comment. Edited by BattleMetal, Jun 29 2009, 06:32 PM.
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http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8040430/1/ Link to my DBZ fan-fic tale: Saiyans, Frieza, the Ginyu Force and other alien races and beings all chucked into the soup-pot for all out action and glory! http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8129945/1/#new Link to a DBZ inspired story/ battle scenario that i did when i was 16 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8071554/1/#new Link to the Marvel/DC tale of the super-powered hereos and villians of both verses. Biggest heavy-hitters square off in an almight-free-for-all brawl! | |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:04 PM Post #8 |
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well then read the entire fan-fic before you post any negative comments/reviews! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:19 PM Post #9 |
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last time on Dragonball NB, Halo went to namek in search of the dragonballs in order to turn the androids into saiyans! The wish was a success thanks to the eternal dragons Shenron & Porunga! All seemed well after the wishes were made but little did they know that a similar new foe was approaching with his own deadly intentions! what will happen find out now! chapter 7: super human cell!!! somewhere on earth halo:i wonder what will happen today 17:something strange halo:so now that you're a saiyan what are you gonna do 17:surpass you for sure halo:i don't think so chump 17:i'll do that after 18 & I get our names changed halo:i forgot about that 17:but for some reason i have a bad feeling that something strange will happen 18:something like what 17:idk but it's strange gohan:well we'll know when it happens goten:but we should be careful vegeta & goku:goten you worry to much trunks:like you wouldn't goten:well i'm gonna go train so i can reach super saiyan's 3 & 4 halo:you need to suddenly 17 went into a state of rage due to him becoming a saiyan because of the side effects from the 2 dragons.he then became consumed by rage hate & anger & transformed into a golden oozaru! halo:got damn it i hate fighting these things goku:i second that vegeta:i can beat these things with my eyes closed halo goku goten 18 trunks:whatever oozaru 17:rraaaahhhhhh halo:shut up trunks:now you just made him even more angry oozaru 17:rrrraaaaaaahhhhhhhh halo:& now i made him stop moving goten:how did you do that? halo:look for yourself trunks/goten:sweet halo: i was on this planet before & my friend taught me how trunks/goten/vegeta/goku/18/gohan:teach us...teach us...teach us halo:some other time not now oozaru 17:aaahhhhh....rrrraaaahhhhhhh halo:good he's changing goku:more competition vegeta:great a fourth super saiyan 4 halo:you say that like it's a bad thing super saiyan4 17:wow that was fun halo:i know that's the only thing i like about those things suddenly ???:& now i will have your power ssj4 17 & halo:who the hell are you cell:i'm ninkata halo:are you a saiyan to ninkata:something like that halo:prove it ninkata:later but first can i get a handshake from you 17? i'm your biggest fan ssj4 17:i see nothing wrong with that! ssj4: 17:what the **** why can't i move ninkata:sucker halo:here goku:gwah it's a barrier vegeta:oh no you don't goten:it won't work trunks:buster cannon vegeta:final flash trunks:finish buster halo & goku:it's a barrier it won't work halo:my turn thunder blast ninkata:ahhh ninkata:alomost finished halo:dragon blast ninkata:ahhh ninkata:finished halo:18 get the hell out 18:allright 18 flew towards the mountains so ninkata wouldn't follow her but she was sadily mistaken 18:i'm safe now ninkata:no the hell you aren't 18:ahhh ninkata:now to take the last & become whole 18:ahh halo:dragon blast ninkata:ahhhhh halo:18 get the hell out 18:ok 18 flew to the ice lands thinking that ninkata wouldn't follow her but she had another thing comming 18:i'm safe now ninkata:hahahahahaha 18:ahh 18:how the hell do you keep finding me ninkata:you tell me halo:fire dragon blast ninkata:ahhh you bastard halo:18 he keeps finding you because you don't hide your ki 18:huh halo:hide you energy & he can't find you ninkata:shut the hell up ninkata:i'll kill you halo:you have that twisted halo:i'll be the one to kill you ninkata:not if i have anything to say about it ninkata:haaaa halo:hump ninkata:where the hell did he & 18 go halo teleported 18 to her home to let her in on a plan halo:18 you want your brother back right 18:y.yes halo:then i'll let you in on a plan 18:what is it halo:i want you to put a lot of your energy out 18:why then he'll find me halo:who's the eldest out of us 18:you are halo:allright then 18:so what's the rest halo:then you'll create a fog using your energy & then hide it while i send mine out confusing him he won't be able to tell the difference 18:ok 18 does as halo instructed & as he predicted ninkata came running like a bear to honey ninkata:i've found you 18:you think ninkata:ahh what the hell is this 18:you tell me ninkata:***** how could i let this happen 18:& halo"s the sucker 18 hides her energy & the fog is sucessfully created & ninkata is confused ninkata:ahh what the hell i can't see halo:that's the whole point ninkata:ah wait i know that voice halo:dragon blast ninkata:ahhh halo:eat this ninkata:gwah 18:he spat 17 out & is losing his power halo: i ain't done yet ninkata:ahhh you bastard i'll return halo:"sigh whatever" thunder dragon ninkata:rraahhhh ninkata is destroyed & 17 returns! all seems well but little do they know that another foe is approching & fast |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:21 PM Post #10 |
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chapter 8:super saiyan 4 nuwa[18] it's a warm breeze outside & as usual halo is outside with goku & Ōnamuji[17] goku:so what do you think will happen today halo/Ōnamuji:something crazy onamuji:honestly i think that today is the day that nuwa transforms into a super saiyan 4 halo:huh run that by me again goku:i believe that he said nuwa will transform onamuji:although she's a female don't dought her! after all she did beat vegeta halo:hahahaha who didn't goku:goten & trunks onamuji:well there's your anwser halo:anyway i dought that nuwa will transform onamuji:ok if you don't believe me look halo:did you forget that i can control when i want to transform goku:well then call nuwa out here onamuji:nuwa onamuji called nuwa to see if what he believed was true nuwa:you called me brother onamuji:yes i told them that you were gonna transform into a super saiyan 4 halo:i still have to see it for my self goku:so do i nuwa:& you will onamuji:i second that halo:i guess you're right i mean vegeta couldn't reach super saiyan 4 without training vegeta:what the hell did you just say onamuji:he siad you're weak halo:he's right! vegeta you need to train more like me,onamuji,& goku vegeta:i bet you 120,000 zenie that i can reach the next level of super saiyan within 7 weeks onamuji:don't do it cause you know that we'll reach it before him nuwa:now if i may what's this talk about me transforming onamuji:just look at the moon nuwa:huh halo:look nuwa looks up at the moon & gets the blunts waves sent through her nuwa:uuhhh halo:what's wrong onamuji:sis are you allright goku:well onamuji you were right onamuji:told you nuwa:uuuhhhh...ahhhhh....rrrraaaagghhhh halo:oh man...not again onamuji:i thought you like those halo:only when i'm the one transforming goku:good point onamuji:i guess you're right nuwa:ahhhhh....rrrraggghhhhhh halo:shut up onamuji:did you have to piss her off now halo:shut up goku:uuhhh i think you need to run oozaru nuwa starts to go on a rampage when oozaru nuwa:rragggghhh halo:didn't i tell you to shut the hell up onamuji:you've done it now look out goku:why are you scared onamuji:that's easy she a big ***** ape right now goku:i should of seen that comming halo:look out oozaru nuwa shoots out a blast & hits goku right in the head goku:i should of seen that comming to halo:haha..priceless onamuji:now that was funny halo:hey nuwa hit vegeta next vegeta:gwah..what halo:oh nothing...except you can't move onamuji:oh great this is priceless after 30 minutes of rampaging nuwa started to change halo:she starting to change onamuji:i never thought she would goku:hey she even had vegeta piss his pants halo:vegeta you sucker vegeta:what did you say halo:you heard what i said onamuji:hey hey..now we all know that halo can beat vegeta in 2 seconds but no need for violence halo:yea you're right goku:now halo:now what goku:to watch nuwa transform halo:hey i got an idea goku/onamuji/vegeta:ok i'm listening after 5 minutes nuwa transformed into a super saiyan 4 halo:ddaammnn onamuji:hey don't get off topic vegeta:wow...she's sexy onamuji:hey that's my sister goku:shut up halo:ok everybody ready onamuji/goku/vegeta:yep halo:hey krillin..come look what we did to nuwa krillin:gwah...what the hell nuwa:do you like krillin:nuwa you're a super saiyan 4..but how nuwa:that's a long story goku:man i wish i had a saiyan as a wife halo:i still have 2 wishes left from prounga goku:let's do it prounga:rraaaggghhh...halo are you ready to have you're final wishes granted halo:nnaahh this is for goku & vegeta:i wish that their wives are saiyans vegeta:why would you something so stupid like that onamuji:because then trunks,goten,&gohan will be full blooded saiyans & pan will be a 1/2 saiyan goku:you idiot prounga:wish granted halo:thanks..you can go back to sleep now prounga:farewell with nuwa successfully transformed into a super saiyan 4 that makes 2 new super saiyan 4's! & little do our heroes know that a new foe will come to earth & will try & raise hell! what will happen next? & who will be the first three saiyans to reach the next level of super saiyan? find out next time! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:25 PM Post #11 |
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chapter 9:Xicor comes to earth somewhere around master roshi's house halo:ugh i feel sick! goku:why? halo:idk i have this feeling that an evil being is comming to earth vegeta:aw so now the super saiyan is getting sick halo:vegeta suht the hell up before i kill you nuwa:& why would you do that halo/onamuji:he's annoying vegeta:hey i heard that halo/onamuji:you were supposed to goku:so what's this about a(n) evil being comming to earth suddenly future trunks:in 3 days a(n) evil saiyan will come to earth to destroy you all halo:trunks where did you come from future trunks:i'm sorry you have me mistaken for someone else onamuji:this isn't the trunks that we know nuwa:i think this is the trunks that we fought when we tried to kill goku future trunks:ah androids you'll pay for killing my father halo:hey...hey listen you live in an alternate timeline so that's why that happened future trunks:you lie halo/vegeta:kakarot's right there..look for yourself future trunks:so you are alive goku:yes..now tell me who this evil saiyan is that's supposed to destroy us future trunks:some say he's an evil clone of you...some say he's your evil 3rd son..but all i know is that he wants revenge goku:revenge? revenge for what? future trunks:idk vegeta:well whoever he is i'll be the first to kill him halo:shut up onamuji:well we'll know in 3 days halo/nuwa:i say we train in the time chamber & gravity room for these 3 days! 12 hours in the time chamber & 12 hours in the gravity chamber! halo:nuwa that's a first nuwa:well lets train to see what he's about everyone else:allright future trunks:well good bye nuwa:bye 3 days past & as future trunks predicted the evil saiyan arrived! at capusle corp vegeta angrily:it's been 4 weeks since we made that bet about who'd achive the next level of super saiyan & halo,kakarot,& onamuji are almost there! even nuwa said she'd reach the next level before me! i don't like that nuwas a female i'll be a saiyan with one arm made out of solid ice that can't be destroyed if she does! trunks:well father halo trains at 1500-1800x of earths gravity & you can only do 300x vegeta:what does that mean? i'm a full blooded saiyan like them trunks:what i ment was that mabye if you increase the gravity at which you train then you'll get stronger! vegeta:shut up trunks:i'll make you a bet father vegeta:what is it trunks:i bet you that i'll reach super saiyan 3 before you reach the next level vegeta:you're on suddenly a(n) force sends a chill down vegeta's spine vegeta:gwah...what's this evil force i felt that sent a chill down my spine trunks:look father..in the sky vegeta:who's that trunks:it looks like halo vegeta:halo what the hell are you doing ???:you have me mistaken for someone else gohan:wait that's not halo.... goten:who are you xicor:my name is xicor & i'm searching for my father goku everybody:what the hell vegeta:i think this is the saiyan that my other on was talking about everyone:no duh trunks:goten let fuse goten:allright trunks/goten:fu-sh-ion-ha gotanks:the mac daddy of justice is here xicor:pathetic fools after 5 minutes xicor is ready to attack gohan:look he's attacking xicor:ka-me-ha-me-ha!!!!! vegeta:what the helll xicor:i told you goku is my father gotanks:we have no relation your not even a saiyan xicor:haa vegeta:he just turned super saiyan gohan:he's not my brother vegeta:i beg to differ xicor:now do destroy you all in one feel swoop vegeta:oh no you don't haa gotanks:bout time some one turned super saiyan 3 vegeta:final flash gotanks:ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:pathetic....negitive energy blast xicor's attack was enough to wipe out all of the saiyans but goku/halo:if you ever try & kill them i'll kill you myself xicor:ah father you'd kill one son to save the others goku:you're not my son! you may be super saiyan but you not my son xicor:everybody says the same thing goku:you're not..we don't even have the same blood xicor:on the contrere we do halo:how do you xicor:this is none of you're business fool halo:anwser my question or i'll kill you xicor:so tough but you're nothing halo:what xicor:you heard what i said goku:vegeta what the heck happened vegeta:aw man he tried to kill us after 20 minutes of pain & healing the fighting continues vegeta:kakarot we have to fuse goku:what the vegeta:you heard what i said now lets fuse goku:allright goku/vegeta:fu-shi-on-ha gogeta:i'll be the one who destroys who halo:my turn gogeta:lets fuse allright halo/gogeta:fu-shi-on-ha ???:hahahahaha....now you're gonna die since i equipped the potarta xicor:gwah what who are ???:you tell me xicor:let me guess the one who will destroy me ???:that's right a new has been born thanks to the power of fusion! who is this new saiyan? & who is this xicor? find out next time |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:26 PM Post #12 |
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chapter 10:my name is hagegta xicor:you're pathetic doing fusion in order to beat me ???:who said i need fusion to beat you gotanks:see what you started xicor xicor:silence fool ???:don't talk to my name xicor:who are speak now ???:i anwser to no-one xicor:i said speak you're name gotanks:yea i want to no your name to xicor:speak or i'll kill your son ???:hahahahaha xicor:i said anwser gotanks:dad just get this over with ???:allright take this ??? fires a ki blast into xicors body & xicor flies into a near by building xicor:ah he's gonna pay for that gohan:i've found you xicor:who the hell are you gohan:my name is gohan & if my dad doesn't finish the job then my brother & i will xicor:i don't believe you kill me at all gotanks:ka-me-ha-me-ha!! xicor:arrggh gohan:my turn ka-me-ha-me-haa!!!!! ???:hey where are you punk xicor:they'll pay for that outside the building gotanks:hey dad can you tell my your name ???:sure my name is hagegta gohan:so is that the combination of halo & gogeta hagegta:yep nuwa:you started the fight without me hagegta:you wern't around so nuwa:i so don't like you onamuji:stop arguing & start focusing on this xicor character nuwa:who is this kid anyway gohan:he claims to be my brother gotanks:someone told me that he's the evil clone of my dad onamuji/hagegta:well one things for sure i don't like him & he needs to die xicor:did you really think i can die so easily hagegta:does it matter he's gonna die anyway suddenly ???:xicor stop playing around & get this over with xicor:ah you! what are you doing here supreme kai:you i know youou surprem ???:nice to see you again supreme kai supreme kai:how did you survive buu's attack ???:find out another time supreme kai:damn you east kai start talking east kai:you see my son xicor is the evil clone of goku hagegta:you bastard east kai:so that makes xicor your father gohan & goten gohan/goten:how the hell do you our names east kai:i know plenty of things..like the fact that halo is goku's oldest brother hagegta:why you xicor what's the matter brother can't stand to hear the truth hagegta:you're no brother of mine...now die..haaa xicor:gwah..who could you do that to your own flesh & blood hagegta:***** you bastard hagegta/gotanks:ka-me-ha-me-ha east kai:what are you doing gotanks:you're the mother of this evil bastard so die xicor:mother no east kai:haa...did you really think that blast could kill me hagegta:does it matter both of you are gonna die anyway xicor:over my dead body gotanks:yea i know gohan:my turn...ultimate ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:your weak as the east kai diverted the blast a falling star fell to ground with something inside hagegta:what the hell gotanks:huh gohan:i think i know what's inside nuwa:is that onamuj:i think it is east kai:right on time..everyone met the thing that will help xicor destroy you all xicor:gwah what is this east kai:let it envolop you with it's dark power xicor:allright hagegta:i'm not gonna like this gohan:neither will i gotanks:ka-me-ha-me-ha gohan:super ka-me-ha-me-ha with the new evil goku clone in west ctiy & a(n) all out war starting all hell might break loose! see what will happen? find out next time! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:26 PM Post #13 |
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chapter 11:hagegta unleashed east kai:whats the matter halo can't take the truth hagegta:shut up xicor:brother don't talk to our mother like that gotanks:you're not halo's brother gohan:you fruad shut your your mouth xicor:hey i'm your father & you can't talk to me like that hagegta:hahahahahahahahahahahaha xicor/east kai:what's so funny hagegta:the fact that 2 imposters claim to knows everything but don't know jack east kai:i'll have your head before this fight his over & we destroy this planet xicor:& i'll be glad to finish the job gotanks:you won't finish jack xicor:don't be so sure about that gotanks:what do you mean xicor:look you're seperating which makes it easier to kill both of you gohan:oh no you don't xicor:huh gohan:soaring dragon ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:what the....mother look out east kai:huh...ahhhh goten/trunks:good ridance gohan's soaring kamehameha seemed to destroyed the east kai but as the smoke clears east kai:ha..ha..ha..ha..i'll kill you all trunks:how did you survive gohan:she used some of her energy to protect herself before the blast could destroy her xicor:cleaver woman our mother is right halo hagegta:you're not my brother goten:you tell'em dad hagegta:now take this...big bang ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:rrraagghhh trunks:did he do it xicor:you'll pay for this halo i swear & i'll kill you as well kakarot goten:is he dead gohan:i don't think so hagegta:no i didn't kill him i mearly sent him to the ice waters of muscle tower hagegta:& now to finish the job supreme kai:halo:what are you doing gohan:what does it look like supreme kai:if you kill her then bojack will return hagegta:i care why..gohan kill him & his goonies by himself supreme kai:no don't nuwa:idk bout this but halo do what you must suddenly xicor:if you kill my mother then i'll kill your nuwa hagegta:idc nuwa:halo you bastard hagegta:did you forget what happened that night nuwa:oh that supreme kai:what the hell happened gohan:just do it xicor:do what hagegta:instant transmission goten:what the trunks:you gotta teach me how to do that xicor:where are you bastard hagegta:i'm here hagegta:take this xicor:gwah..why you nuwa:i'm free hagegta:yes now get your brother nuwa:allright as nuwa flies to get her brother xicor shoots out a blast & blows gohan,goten & trunks into the ice waters xicor:you're not going anywhere nuwa:gwah xicor:now die all of you hagegta:nuwa....goten,trunks,gohan east kai:now to finish job xicor:do it hagegta:noooo the east kai unleashes a blast that follows the blasted saiyans to their point in the ice waters east kai/xicor:hahahahahahahahaha hagegta:you bastards xicor:what are you gonna do bout it hagegta:this east kai(drained of all her power):ahhhhh hagegta:now it's just you & me xicor:you kill my mother hagegta:& now i'll kill you xicor:do it hagegta:damn those last attacks drained me of my power xicor:now my chance take this hagegta:gwah xicor:hahahahahaha the sun is high in the sky & hagegta is on the floor looking at the sun wanting to avenge his somewhat dead friends hagegta:i'll kill him xicor:now to finish the job hagegta:it looks like the end for us xicor:die...devil flash blast hagegta:gwah hagegta thinking:what's this place & why does it fell like i'm loosing my mind dragoon's spirit:it's time for a new transformation halo hagegta:transformation..what transformation dragoons's spirit:your tansfromation into me hagegta:& how do i that dragoon's spirit:look at the sun & let it's power infuse in you hagegta:uuugghh dragoon's spirit:now it's happening as hagegta looks uop into the sun he starts to change hagegta:ahh xicor:still alive huh hagegta:ahhh xicor:get ready to die hagegta:raaghhh xicor:gwah..what the hell hagegta:rraagggghhhh xicor:what's this transfromation xicor has a flashback to when he & the east kai were talking east kai:now xicor there's one transformation that you need to look out for xicor:& what's that east kai:the dragons spirit xicor:what's that east kai:it's when the blue dragon's spirit comes to you & you look into his eyes & up at the sun,moon,or any star/planet xicor:allright the flashback stops & xicor:no it can't be hagegta:rrraaggghhh xicor:i'm too late he's already transformed into the blue dragon hagegta:ahhhh..rraaaggghhh with hagegta's transformation into the blue dragon xicor stares into the face of death! can hagegta take control of the transformation before it controls him? find out next time |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:28 PM Post #14 |
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chapter 12:hagegta the spirit saiyan dragoon hagegta:rraagghhhh xicor:i'll kill you before you transform halo pan:grandpa what happened to you dragoon hagegta:ahhhh xicor:aaww pan you're worried about me...how sweet pan:you xicor:yes me pan:you're not my grandpa you fake bastard xicor:you dare talk to me like that dragoon hagegta:rrrrraaghhh xicor:aw shut the hell up dragoon hagegta:take this..rraaghhh pan:grandpa dragoon hagegta:yes pan it's me pan:but how did you dragoon hagegta:idk but his transformation of halo's does come in handy xicor:now to kill off our granddaughter kakarot pan:gwah..wha dragoon hagegta:ahhh.....rrrraggghhh pan:grand pa what's happening to you xicor:nothing pan:shut the hell up you fake bastard...kamehameha xicor:ahhh after pan turned super saiyan & tried her best to fight xicor off xicor knocks her out hagegta upset starts to transform again but this time into someting more deadly dragoon hagegta:aahhhh xicor:now brother to kill you & kakarot dragoon hagegta:pan..xicor what did you do to her xicor:what's it look like....i killed her dragoon hagegta:eat this xicor:oh damn dragoon hagegta fires multiple blasts most of them miss but some hit xicor & knock him out! after this dragoon hagegta transform! dragoon hagegta:ahhh spirit dragon hagegta:ah i feel much better now xicor:ahh....i'm too late spirit hagegta:& now to avenge my granddaughter xicor:no don't spirit hagegta:why not xicor:if you kill me then you kill yourself spirit hagegta:you're nothing but clone so if i kill you it shouldn't matter xicor but it does spirit hagegta:not to me spirit hagegta:now die xicor:nnnooo as spirit dragon hagegta prepare to kill xicor,xicor throws a ki blast into halo's face to blind him so he can get away! xicor:ah..ah..ha...damn that was close east kai's spirit:xicor you fool i told how to reverse the transformation xicor:but how he's already transformed east kai:that doesn't matter xicor:but how can i reverse him into normal east kai:drain him of his energy & then he'll revert back to normal xicor:i can't every time i try to get near him he somehow teleports behind me & flies away east kai:i'll try & help you the best i can son xicor:allright i'll try what i can east kai:aahhhh xicor:what spirit dragon hagegta:eat this spirit hagegta:chaos ka-me-ha-me-ha east kai's spirit:nnooo...xicor avenge me xicor:mother...you kill our mother spirit hagegta:& now i'll kill you xicor:solar flash spirit hagegta:aahhh my eyes xicor:i'll kill you halo & kakarot..you to vegeta spirit hagegta:i dought it as xicor's worst nightmare comes true he's forced to run & hide! spirit hagegta is on his tail & is closing in on him! what will happen? find out next time! |
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| Inu no Taishō | Jun 29 2009, 07:29 PM Post #15 |
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chapter 13:the death of xicor xicor:hahaha..gasp..hahaha i'm safe hagegta:think again xicor:ahhh..no don't hagegta:now die xicor:solar flare hagegta:damn not again xicor:that'll buy me some time to escape & heal hagegta:ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:oh no you don't...devil flash blast hagegta:you'll need more power if you wish to escape.....hhhhaaaa xicor:nnnooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! hagegta's kamehameha wave sends xicor flying to the muscle tower but he isn't finished yet! hagegta:hump i'll kill him if it's the last thing i do today! hagegta:& now to stun him xicor:gwah...what the xicor:i can't move hagegta:exactly pan:grandpa hagegta:pan pan:yes grandpa it's me i was just unconscious hagegta:that's good to know xicor:rraagghhh xicor:halo you bastard hagegta:hahahahahahaha...halo's real name is Inu no Tashiou xicor:but how it can't be hagegta:but it is xicor:how all you bastards were killed by a solar storm hagegta:put it like this hagegta:before bardock died he traveled to another glaxay xicor:that doesn't make sense how are you a inu daiyōkai saiyan? bardock was a(n) oozaru saiyan! hagegta:when bardock traveled to that part his whole geneitic code was re-written into that of a(n) inu daiyōkai saiyan so when he met my mother i was born a full blooded inu daiyōkai saiyan! xicor:*****..you bastard hagegta:i told you you wern't my brother pan:grandpa so that means you can turn into a hagegta:yes it does xicor:i don't care...you'll die all the same hagegta:ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:now die inu daiyōkai hagegta:i'm afraid i can't cause i'm the last of the inu daiyōkai saiyans pan:kill him grandpa after 40 minutes hagegta's power starts to weaken xicor:his power is decreasing hagegta:*****..my power xicor:now's my chance xicor:die hagegta:eat this pan:grandpa wait xicor:why pan:why what hagegta:pan why did you do that pan:he's your clone which makes him my clone father hagegta:i hate these sentemetal moments pan/xicor:what the hagegta:ka-me-ha-me-ha xicor:rrrrrraagggghhhhhh pan:grandpa why hagegta:he was an evil clone! he was going to kill you pan:that doesn't matter pan:he was still your brother hagegta:no brother of mine is an clone & wants kill me...let alone my family pan:good point hagegta:now lets go fish them out the water pan:how many fishing poles do you have hagegta:bout 9 or 10 in the 20 minutes pan & hagegta were searching for the fishing poles the fusion was split up into the regular 3 inu no tashiou:ready pan pan:yes goku:ready vegeta vegeta:shut up i'm only doing this to get my wife son & daughter inu no tashiou:let's go pan:allright 10 minutes later inu no tashiou goku vegeta & pan are at muscle tower with their fishing poles inu no tashiou:anyone got a bite goku:nope vegeta:nope pan:nope vegeta:got damn it inu no tashiou this is getting boring inu no tashiou/goku:aw shut up vegeta pan:i gotta bite goku:you do who is it pan:my dad vegeta:hey i got my wife inu no tashiou:i got trunks vegeta:i have goten goku:i have nuwa inu no tashiou:oh i have.... vegeta:have what goku:him inu no tashiou:he's not dead vegeta:who pan:xicor xicor:huh inu no tashiou:die xicor:nnooo after inu no tashio throws xicor back into the frozen waters everybody is rounded up & brought back to bulmas house! as they prepare to leave the icy waters start to turn red & everybody knows who blood it is! but little do they know that more saiyans are on their way to earth! each with their own goal in mind! |
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